Btw, where's the song ???????

No songs this year

no song but it is funny

Over or under, that is the question.I eepfrr the toilet tissue to be fixed OVER than under. Why? I don't really know the reason why. Maybe, that's how I grew up with and that's how my Mom fix the toilet tissue in our bathroom, so up to this point in time that's how I want the toilet tissue to be. The funny thing is when I go to my BFs or sister's house or some other houses for that matter, I do notice how their toilet tissue is arranged, although I wanted to fix it the way I am used to, I don't, because it's not my house and who cares anyway, it's just a toilet humor that nobody will appreciate­,­ except OCDs.I hope that made sense.

good plot! but work on your wording, you get a tiltle redundant at times, too descriptiv­e­ maybe. Also amnesia effects personal memories, someone with amnesia still knows how to function (shake hands, what orange juice is) you need to stay more consistent as well, Aiyana goes from confident to wild to nervous and back all in a span of moments, your not developing a solid character at all. think about who you want aiyana to be and then write her character, don't go from the top of your head.simpl­ify­ things the first time through then you can add depth when you edit it, don't say aiyana was the first person to enter the room, try saying following her into the room i saw you'll get it though just keep writing!

Good to see real expertise on display. Your contributo­in­ is most welcome.